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[Dyc: Diplomacy]

Things I love about DYC:
The blase expression on Charles the tyrannosaur.
The noises the triceratops makes instead of talking.
The monocles.
"Any gentleman worth his weight in marmite..."
And most of all, President Reagan.

AnimonsterOfficial responds:

Thanks! We aim to please.

[Black Dynamite vs Pootie]

Artwork is sick. Audio quality sucks, though.

Neochilds responds:

Thanks dude, Blaxploitation old school slickness.

[Chronicle Collab #1]

A lot of build-up and it was mostly worth it, very slick. But why the stick fights? Why not actually have characters? You guys are obviously good enough, why hinder yourselves by drawing goddamn stick figures?

Quikanims responds:

Stickfiguring is an art of animation which the majority of the people in our community take seriously, it is not just a lazy way to avoid full body...

We have intentionally used stick figures to perform more things that most full body figures with human anatomy can't actually do...

And these are our characters, not having all the natural anatomy of a human does not dictate lack of humanity emotion or mentally for our characters... They have just as much or more character than the full body figures you seem to enjoy...

[A Banana!]

Bananas are tricky little buggers, aren't they.

Cockadoodledee responds:

About as lethal as a loaded gun.

[Wile E. Coyote: 127 Hours]

I loved everything about this.

Except that it runs on loop.

YULFO83 responds:

I'm new to this. how do I stop that?

[A Glimpse of Life, 1]

The audio is inconsistent, between crappy and alright. It is very distracting.

Second, I think you need to work on your script. It's a little trite, and very pretentious. Frankly, you're not covering any new ground here. This isn't challenging, and it doesn't make me thoughtful. It is actually only a shallow facsimile of depth.

If you want to fix it, get rid of the editorializing. Instead of saying "a restless woman going home to her kids blahblahblah," actually, you know, describe things and show us with your animation. Like, "The woman next to me fiddles with the corner of her bag-- she seems restless, tired, anxious to get home. I wonder if she has children waiting for her blahblahblah."

Also, your description of the man makes me grind my teeth, so definitely change that one.

enh264 responds:

Hey thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it. It was a short script I came out with a while back ago which I didn't change much. Would you recommend and perhaps give me an example of a different script? But one thing, I would like to keep the same visuals and scenes that it has right now. I will need to re-record the voice with a better mic as well, and will ad a pre-loader.

All the best

[The Horn Animated 2]

When they laugh, it scares me.

TopHatSquid responds:

Their laughter echoes within my soul.