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[iFuck for iPad and iPhone]

"You can put your penis in and take your penis out as much as you want."

SOLD.

[A Glimpse of Life, 1]

The audio is inconsistent, between crappy and alright. It is very distracting.

Second, I think you need to work on your script. It's a little trite, and very pretentious. Frankly, you're not covering any new ground here. This isn't challenging, and it doesn't make me thoughtful. It is actually only a shallow facsimile of depth.

If you want to fix it, get rid of the editorializing. Instead of saying "a restless woman going home to her kids blahblahblah," actually, you know, describe things and show us with your animation. Like, "The woman next to me fiddles with the corner of her bag-- she seems restless, tired, anxious to get home. I wonder if she has children waiting for her blahblahblah."

Also, your description of the man makes me grind my teeth, so definitely change that one.

enh264 responds:

Hey thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it. It was a short script I came out with a while back ago which I didn't change much. Would you recommend and perhaps give me an example of a different script? But one thing, I would like to keep the same visuals and scenes that it has right now. I will need to re-record the voice with a better mic as well, and will ad a pre-loader.

All the best

[The Horn Animated 2]

When they laugh, it scares me.

TopHatSquid responds:

Their laughter echoes within my soul.

[League Of Loners]

Crikey. Sorry to beat a dead horse, but the echoing in the voice files make this nearly unwatcheable. Which is a shame, because I think it's otherwise pretty solid.

DoDaThang responds:

It's cool, at first it was a shame, then it was a concern but now it's frankly it's kind of funny. My only concern at this point is when I go back to uni the guy who did the voices will want to know if I finished this animation...

Do I really want to direct him to a torrent of people telling him how shit he is or do I want him to think I'm lazy? Tis a pickle...

Thanks for checking it out anyway. :)

[Hamsters the aliens part2]

Voice acting is distractingly bad, as is the writing. But I liked the concept.

[archer]

I think it looks pretty good, but once gthe first arrow hits it gets a litle muddled.

Klipus responds:

Yea , you're kind of right , I got a bit sloppy as time went by :)

[My Kirlia evolves!]

You're a weird guy.

[Can't Trust Commercials]

You animation and art style is awesome, but your backgrounds kind of suck.

Rovertarthead responds:

Oh well thats cause I was trying to make a short animation as fast as I can and I thats why theres not much details in the background. I know I'll probbaly change it in a bit.

[Tempura]

That's uh... that's really awesome, actually. Though I could have used some more depth of color in the background.

[Falcohm Punch!]

Ha ha this is totally still relevant