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[Magic Ostrich: OAQ 2]

I have no idea what this is about. But it's adorable and the art-style and music work for me.

dewington responds:

Glad you liked, despite the confusion! This sounds like the perfect opportunity to plug the Introduction of an Ostrich video hidden away in my movie list thing - confusion-be-gone! http://dewington.newgrounds.com/movies/

[New Eden - Slappin' Slug]

More great animation, very slick. Still not a whole lotta jokes, but the slapstick wasn't bad at all-- it really plays to your strength of good animation and artwork. The faces were pretty good as well.

[New Eden - Pilot]

The animation was great and I like the set-up, but there weren't really any... jokes, per ce. Just funny situations. And smarminess, which isn't really ha-ha funny.

Anyway, all things considered, I like this, and there aren't enough sci-fi comedies out there.

NewEdenseries responds:

Glad you liked it but more importantly thanks for the feedback and well observed.

Since making the pilot and our series of shorts (coming soon) we're evaluating how to move forward and what type of "comedy" is our strengths and if we're missing a trick anywhere along the way.

Look forward to hearing what you think of the shorts when they're released.

[LUCKY DAY FOREVER]

Gorgeous in every way. The level of detail and care in the artwork, the soundtrack, the narrative flow all work wonderfully. Gentle but biting, tragic and deeply human. Thanks for submitting this.

[DeX]

A lot of the robot-speak was extremely stilted. And the use of "compute" made my teeth grind.

[Just an Average Daydream]

I really liked what you were going for here, but I thought the monologue was a little trite. Lots of nice little touches here. I would have liked to see more relevant stuff happening in the squares. Also, sound quality was not great.

[This Is Why]

Trippy, cool music, good animation... what's not to like. Good work, man. And I like the title.