missedtarget's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom Aven]

This isn't the place for this. If you don't understand something, don't do it.

That said, this doesn't have much merit, dude. You didn't clean up the sketchlines, the hands are kindergartener-drawing clubs, and his face is ridiculously lopsided. Also, his head's too big, his arms are too long, and his torso is too short.

Oh, and don't START by drawing anime. All the little stylistic shit isn't supposed to be a crutch. I mean, I did the same thing when I was younger, but don't get better until you actually learn to draw without them.

SunOh responds:

This drawing was experimental. Normally, I don't draw anime cause it takes too long to draw one person. My characters are all currently being drawn in semi-chibi-somewhat-anime style or something close to that.

[Dragon's Tear, chapter 1]

You know, I've heard worse writing.

[Oh My Goodness]

You are the man now, and WE are the men.

[little boat]

Wow. I loved everything about this. The water effects and the sound were spot on, gorgeous animation. Favorited.

[Pencilmation #24]

Crisp and professional as hell. Really fun animation.

[Texting while Dying]

This was so stupid and preachy it went through bad, past terrible, careened over embarassing and crashed into a burning heap of hilarious.

5 stars!

[Sub-Zero's Fatality]

The artwork is hideous to the point of detracting from the animation (which actually isn't awful). I'm at work so I couldn't appreciate the audio. Also, your punchline doesn't really hit home, and the pause before he delivers his final, unfunny quip is waaay too long.

I don't mean to be down on you, and if you're just starting out with animation that's cool, but your art and your writing need work. Don't take it personally.