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Okay, man, I've seen a bunch of your stuff on here and I've even seen you complain about how difficult the NG community is to please. Now, I don't claim to be any kind of expert on NG, but the problem, for me, is the same problem as the one that's been in all of the cartoons of yours I've seen, and please don't be offended: It's not really funny.

I mean, ok, let's do a breakdown of this cartoon: it's a parody of "party rock," only you're making a dick joke. What, from a humor standpoint, are you adding? What, in short, is supposed to be funny? Think about other parody songs, like Weird Al (because really, is there anyone else?). Can you think of a single one of his that doesn't have a plot? I can't. Honestly. Because a one note joke is, well... a one note joke.

Of course, that doesn't really solve your problem, but maybe it implies how humor should work. And thus far, beneath decent animation, you haven't really ironed the kinks out of that yet.

Pretty sure that's not the first time I've seen that. What is it with Japanese schoolgirls and those highspeed trains?

Kel-chan responds:

what's with the symbology of trains going into tunnels?

An odd mixture of good and bad art-- Abed himself was a little awkward and did not look at all natural when he walked, but your backgrounds were nice, and the concept wasn't bad, though I was a little confused by the grid at the start and finish.

Wow. I loved this. Too bad about the collaboration. And the music was awesome, so that will be my next stop.

Foxcato responds:

Super glad you enjoyed it. Yeah it did kinda suck about that collab. It had a pretty inspiring theme... but oh well, what can you do?

Yeah you should def check out Slug-Salt's tunes. He is fucking awesome!

You're both magical.

I couldn't hear the audio because of the loud-ass typing noises, so pretty much it was just some guy typing for a minute and a half. That said, if there had been no talking, and you'd just looped the animation, like I thought and laughed for a second before I realized, "no, he was going for something else," I probably would have liked this a lot more.

Little is known of Missedtarget, save that he writes, seems to enjoy science, and is uniformly hated. If Missedtarget has wronged you in some way, know that you may seek reparations through a class-action lawsuit: "The Universe vs. Missedtarget."

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